There Must Be A Better Way

I start a story without fanfare….or much planning.  Really, almost no prior plotting is involved when I sit down to write.  I often have a stupid moment somewhere along the line in a manuscript where I stop and say "wait, the hero had a brother?"  then have to go back and make sure my writing brain had some inkling before the rest of me did.  Strangely enough, the foundation is usually there.

My process is ridiculous.  No, really, it’s ridiculous.  I carry around these little notebooks - usually only one at a time because I don’t want to look like a total dweeb.   A thought will hit me and I’ll write it down.  When the idea starts to stick in my head - whether it’s an opening scene or a general plot idea - I write my little notes.  These notes are unreadable and would not be even slightly coherent to anyone else.  Frankly, if you read them you’d be convinced I’m insane.  The point is that I try to spin this handwritten mess into something, sit down and begin.  If it’s a romantic suspense, I’ll generally know who gets to die but not necessarily why or how.  No long synopsis.  No outline.  Just the scribbled notes of a crazy woman. 

The plot develops as I go along.  Then, every day (I say that as if I actually write every day like I should - but I do try, honest) I start by reviewing what I wrote the day before, edit that then I move forward.  Thanks to some bizarre compulsion, if I’m on chapter 3, I’ll go back to the beginning of the manuscript, to chapter 1, and read through and edit before I can start writing chapter 3.  This helps the characters to form in my mind (or so I like to believe) and for me to work on issues like continuity and plot flow (well, I’m hoping that’s true).  At some point about half way through the book, I stop going back to chapter 1 to start every writing day and, instead, limit the process to the previous 3 chapters.  Otherwise, each book would take me exactly 4 years to write and I can’t have that.  Rejections take 4 years so I must write faster to stay ahead of the thick envelopes that will soon clutter my mailbox.

I’ve heard Suzanne Brockmann speak about her process.  She starts with some horrifyingly long synopsis, like 90 pages, then "the book writes itself" from there.  Yeah, she said that and since I like her I didn’t throw anything at her.  I once heard Jennifer Crusie say "I write the good parts first" which is completely foreign to me since I have no freaking idea what the good parts are before I start.  I’ve mentioned Alison Kent’s plotting board and the nightmares that thing gave me.  If you’ve been to Nationals (RWA’s annual conference) you’ve gotten the thick book of handouts which inevitably includes about 100 charts, graphs and power point presentations on characters and plot.  I can’t even look through that book without vomiting.  If I’m supposed to being doing that I’m dead ’cause I can’t write using those devices.

We all have our way of doing this.  But, I often wonder if my way is really the right way for me.  This usually coincides with some writing life crisis, like when I decide I suck and should go into retail sales instead of trying to write a book.  Can we change our process?  I can’t imagine doing this another way.  Hell, I can barely do it the way I do it.  Should we try to change?  The answer, probably, is no.  Why change something that works or that we think works.  With my luck I’d change the process and then realize the only thing I had going for me was the unwieldy original process.  Very upsetting.

6 Responses to “There Must Be A Better Way”

  1. Wendy Duren Says:

    I have notebooks full of scribbled ideas too. These books are well hidden least anyone find them and think I’m the next Unabomber.

  2. Jordan Says:

    It works for Stephen King. ;-) I started out writing this way. It’s now morphed into a combo bullet points on a paper/seat of the pants thing. I think whatever is working for you is what you should stick with.

  3. Renet Says:

    You can change your process, or at least I can. I used to just go from ‘visions’– a scene, a resolution, a way I wanted the story to go. Now I still do that, sometimes, but am far more comfortable going with an idea and taking the story from there. (My current novel is still hung up in its third act, but I’m well aware I have third act problems!)

    You’re going to laugh like a maniac but I’ve found for me one of the best ways to experiment with process was…ready? You guessed it: fan fiction. I was so terribly connected with my original characters and working process that I didn’t feel comfortable ‘mixing things up.’ There was too much ego involved for me, and too much stress. Playing around with other people’s characters was really liberating, in that respect; I could relax a little and let myself have fun. Let’s try a scene that’s nothing but sex that’s also a character study! Sure, why not? Let’s try describing things from the point of view of the dragon! It helped me find new angles and things I missed and ways others could interpret my work– halfway through my NaNo I realized that two female characters could be easily seen as a couple, and I chose to leave their relationship ambigious.

    Now I’m working on trying to write longer pieces again, both original and fan-related.

    Now, I’m not suggesting you run out and write fanfiction! But I do think you shouldn’t be afraid of trying different voices, styles, processes, and you need to find what you’ll feel is a ’safe space’ for doing that– short stories, different characters, whatever works for you.

  4. HelenKay Says:

    Renet - You’re killing me here. See, I vowed not to venture into fanfic land again after my final post last night on the issue. Ever. Anyone who wants further discussion on that topic should just wander over to Lee Goldberg’s site and yell at him for awhile. He’s older, wiser, wealthier - all the er’s. That being said, thank you for stopping in and for being thoughtful and decent.

    As for trying other voices and processes, I guess my sense is that this is the only way that works for me, if it even does. I’ve thought about trying a first person short story based on whatever horrific life incident I can tolerate to dredge up just to see. Something totally different. I may do that yet. Great way to excorcise some demons too.

  5. Renet Says:

    I know, I know, but I had to be honest. It’s my greatest flaw, I assure you!

    But really, I think you should try experimenting– at the very worst, it’ll make you realize that the way you work *is* the style for you, and at the best it’ll break your old habits.

  6. Evangeline Says:

    Oh God…I had to ignore everyone. I’ve tried everything: Jane Austen plot(from romance writing for idiots), the GMC thing, Beverly Brandt’s, Alison’s, etc, ETC!! And it only ended up frustrating me to pieces and causing me to throw my story away because it was too convoluted. Now, I go back to the basics. Occasionally I’ll feel the need to write the story out by hand in a semi-loose synopsis, but otherwise, I just jot down things in my notebook. I agree with Jordan, go with what you’re comfortable with, even after you’ve tried tons of plotting processes.

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